my innocence

I cry when I look in the mirror, but not because of the obvious, not because I desire to not be the reflection but because, I fear, that I, am, losing the waters eyes. I fear that with each wave the creature that I once knew so well drifts furthur...and furthur away. It doesn't come in tsunamis. It comes in little ripples slowly carrying it away. And it...what is it doing as I fall to my knees and cry BEGGING for some one to do SOMETHING

ANYTHING it...is in a sweet slumber that looks so...so..peaceful, that even the demons and angels fear awakening it, but me?...I'd give EVERYTHING and ANYTHING up, just for it back......I fall I cry my sobs, I scream, I yell, I break and break thing but still...nothing. No reaction from this world. I AM INVISIBLE without it I do not exist. I am NOTHING!!!!!! and yet what are those words that I hear? What are the words oh so kind that escape from your cherry red lips as if you'd just gotten done drinking my blood away, the words..the words that escape those BLOOD red lips what are they?...3 words....yes....okay..I understand now. "I love you" Those words that you have just spoken to me YOU KNOW WHAT IVE JUST BEEN THROUGH YOU INSENSITIVE B*****D but no...did you care, even the tiniest bit..no you cheered the water on as it took it MY it away. You say those words all you like I will NEVER say them back so yes, keep beating me, keep raping me I REFUSE!!!!
I won't give in I won't you can't have IT you cant have ME I won't LET YOU!!! I REFUSE but your pounding...you've broken down my door now there's nothing left I can't do anything you pin me to the bed you stole it...my innocence..

Reviews

[Suicidal Teddybear]

This is ^%$&£$% AMAZING i love it and i love how everyone can interperate their own past or thoughts in to it you might like a poem/rant of mine i think it's untitled its LONG but i think you mght like

[Epiphany]

Wow, this is a very powerful piece that cries out to the reader - not the losing of innocence but the stealing of innocence...well done!

Enjoy the day with love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share ;-) ;-) ;-)

[Jacky Bones]

wow that makes me think of sad things that happened to my friends

[Mey]

Well done, a little bit of formatting could really help this piece but other than that very well done.

[topsyturvy]

I love it.. the intensity of it, then losing something truly precious.. fighting for everything, not letting it consume you, but still even at the very end, you still refuse.. great write.:)