A Poem For Richey

A Poem For Richey

A Poem by prettybretty

He read and wrote as if words were the air he breathed
To feel better he carved his skin to make it bleed
He exercised and starved to achieve bodily correction
What he didn't know what that he was already perfection

© 2014 prettybretty


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This poem is short, deep and powerful with rhythm.
That's why I believe that we all should strive to keep our self-esteem high and be content our natural body. A physical exercise is good for a healthy lifestyle, but it should be done for us, not because we're trying to impress anyone, or are influenced by people's judgment or perception of us.

NICE POEM!
WELL DONE!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This poem is short, deep and powerful with rhythm.
That's why I believe that we all should strive to keep our self-esteem high and be content our natural body. A physical exercise is good for a healthy lifestyle, but it should be done for us, not because we're trying to impress anyone, or are influenced by people's judgment or perception of us.

NICE POEM!
WELL DONE!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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prettybretty

Lawrenceburg, TN



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Brett 24 TN, USA agender/nonbinary pansexual Sicangu Lakota Native American OCD, BPD, & ED I've been using this site for 10 years to record my poems. I don't write to be good at it, this .. more..