Until That Day

Howard's poem to his miscarried child from Surviving the Fog-Kathy's Recollections

Copyright 2013

By Stan Morris

From Surviving the Fog-Kathy’s Recollections

 

Until That Day

 

Until we see you once again,

We will not know what you might have looked like.

We will not hear you call our names,

Until we see you once again.

 

Until we see you once again,

We cannot know who you might have become.

And we cannot teach you what we wished you to know,

Until we see you once again.

 

Until we see you once again,

Mama and I cannot hold you in our arms.

But we will always love you as if we did,

Until that day we see you once again.

Reviews

[Horizons]

Illustration of faith, love, sadness, loneliness and life in the poem played a vital role to look at the life in that way too .. 'Until' word brings some impact with your words your used in the poem. I liked the concept. Good poem.

[Jagger Cyde]

You very nicely illustrate the feelings of sadness, but also the feelings of finding that small hope that are commonly associated with death.

[Acer]

Nicely written.

[Holly Mason]

this is lovely
do not know if your thoughts were of the conneticut shootings but that is what
it brought to my thoughts thank you for sharing

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Great fella....today i' did get my few minutes only for your writing...couse i think i didn't read out your much work....i think this is your first poem that i'm reading....& now i'm thinking that i didn't waste my time on your writing....i loved it...i loved last phrase much......your poem is not longer.......not much shorter....i think it's suite with your tittle...

such a wonderful line "until we see you once again..."...........nice fella...
now there's so more lines' can be arise from your tittle....i think you should have to continue it.....i'm saying couse i wannna read it more.....i wanna analyse your more thought's about the tittle........anyway....i liked + loved it damn.....as soon i get my more time i'd like to read your more work/writing's.....
carry-on fella....you should have to continue it....
have a nice + wonderful = beautiful day.......

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