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I asked for a rose,
he gave me a rose garden
with white fences guarding it. 
I asked for a novel,
he gave me first editions
he bought from auctions and museums.
I asked for a trip to the nearby park,
he took me to see 
Moscow, Argentina 
and the canals in Venice.
I asked him to lie to me,
he said “I love you.”

Reviews

[Michael G. Smith]

I have a talent for putting a twist on life and with that throwing at us readers unexpectedly. You lure us in with your charms and BAM!!! Love it.

[Arly Parent]

Oof. Can I say that I hate how good that was? I'm going to say it anyway. Damn.

[Addie Santos]

Haha, not as good as your work Arly! Thanks.

[Arly Parent]

Psh. Haha.

[WE]

pure and beautiful , well written

[Addie Santos]

Mahalo love ♡

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very nice expresion. with words what make this poem very real.

[Addie Santos]

Thank you. A lesson to be learned before any of you could even enter the world of the wealthy who claim you're "the one".