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 crawl in deep

dig further

                    run away

down to the core

the monster inside

                    run away

your cryptic thoughts

shallow desires

insipid personality

who are you?

                    run away

the eternal quest

 

do you disgust yourself?

are you afraid?

the snake will swallow you whole

if he senses fear.

 

 

 

Author's Note

This is what I came up with after a month of writer's block. Please give me your opinion.

Reviews

[prjctREdiscovery]

The reader can find a lot of emotion hidden in the words, I like it.

[Grayze Anne]

The flow of the poem wasn't that clear, but other than that it was a wonderful poem. :D
What I meant with the flow is that the words didn't seem, uh how do I explain this, connected?
My favorite was the snake part.
"the snake will swallow you whole

if he senses fear."

Thanks for posting this. ^^

[Hello, Goodbye]

I like the structure plus the pockets of ideas were great. .good writing..