Tempted to never leave

Tempted to never leave

A Poem by Mpotavin

I inhale the whiskey on your breath

your crooked smile dances away

behind the flutter of eyelashes

and a final shake of your a*s

imperious you leave me

cold and gasping

© 2008 Mpotavin


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what a tease she is! I liked this, said SO much with just a few words...left an impression!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Mpotavin
Mpotavin

Phoenix, AZ



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I have stood before cameras and stage. Smiled or just screamed in rage. I have feasted and gorged, fasted and purged my soul balanced between darkness and light. I have held a man as he died, whispere.. more..