Stalker

humorous, poem

You say you don't know me,
But that's not true.
I don't care how others judge me,
I'm coming for you.
You can't hide you can't run,
You'll never get away.
I am like the sun,
And its omnipresent rays.
Call police, call your family,
They'll never stop me.
I have the vid number of your camry
And a replica of your caller id.
Some people call me a stalker,
But its nothing like that.
You owe me money,

AND I WANT IT BACK!!!!!

Author's Note

Be harsh with the criticism, I need this!

Reviews

[Ian]

How much she owe you.
Your poem fits well with the title.
good job.

[Global Norskie]

haha! I liked it!

One error I saw: "I don't care how other's judge me" - I'm assuming others is plural, hence has no apostrophe.

Great job!