Essences of a Lonely Heart

I have witnessed the knowing of a lonely heart
One that have none, no ability to heal themselves
Desperate with long dreadful tears
A lengthy sobbing
That entranced the world’s pain
An audience for every watery drop of eye liquid

I recite this tale to you to warn you
Of being engulfed by these irregular moods
Cause I’ve seen the malicious lurking’s
That independent separation of soullessness
Clutching that emptiness of that all-knowing feeling
I plead for you

To open your ears to these psalms
This siren of exact hope
Listing the agony of another
Displaying a vivid depiction
Transforming someone’s imagery
Into a manuscript of un-ignorance

Do not disregard my immeasurable fable
As I inscribe your mind with lasting knowledge
To embrace that lost spirit
That has begun an exploration of self repentance
Walking pointlessly into a gapping whole
Of un-appreciation and self-confusion

We must be soldiers of compassion
Mobilizing our energies
Giving those mislead beings vigor
Destroying walls of unfitting obscurity
Pulling them close to you, giving them your all
So, I’ve seen the Essences of a Lonely Heart

Reviews

[Personne]

Goodness, beautiful. I enjoyed very much so. Your poetry all in all is just very sophisticated sounding, and I like it! Keep writing(:

[Steven Cash]

:) thumbs up

[Patricia B. Hepler]

Wise and compassionate. Excellent. ~pat

[Screaming Soul]

I too have seen the lonely heart. People must knnow they are never alone.
Yes.. soldiers of compassion. So true.

[Mia]

"To open your ears to these psalms
This siren of exact hope"
This is lovely, in a haunting kind of way. The way you described feelings in this poem is phenomenal.

[Rufus "Mr Blaque" Lacy, Jr]

Many times people ignore the cries of others. We must listen.

[Mark]

The second verse seems to warn us about being engulfed by a bottomless need ... I can relate to that, but then you talk about giving them your all... I guess if someone shows honest repentance or willingness to leave their shadows? Sometimes people allow their sorrows, loneliness to become their all...

It's a very deep subject, and I'm not sure I am able to follow what you are saying here.

[Rufus "Mr Blaque" Lacy, Jr]

As individuals we see people needing some kind of guidance or encouragement but we tend to ignore them, then tragedy occur. Then we wish we could have done something to stop the incident before it happen. As individuals we can help by being more observant of our surroundings and giving people a kind word or two.

[MOON]

Lovely poignant write.Clutching that emptiness of that all-knowing feeling
I plead for you

To open your ears to these psalms
This siren of exact hope
Listing the agony of another
Displaying a vivid depiction
Transforming someone’s imagery
Into a manuscript of un-ignorance

[Bewitching Sensations]

Very very good.. love the bit.....'To embrace that lost spirit
That has begun an exploration of self repentance
Walking pointlessly into a gapping whole
Of un-appreciation and self-confusion'

[Pitta S Dev]

Good write.