Snow

“Snow receives a ruthless rap”

This white magnificence of one season
That cascades from the heavens
Blanketing all in it’s path
Covering the foliage and construction
Having an uncontaminated pleasure for it
The beautiful form of a flake
Tumbling many, never equal
Displaying uniqueness per

“Snow receives a ruthless rap”

Reviews

[cloud]

You've expressed yourself well here. I like snow and always have. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem.

[Nik]

Nice
- "a flakes" ? Shouldnt u remove the 'a' ?

[Jack...]

Indeed it does receive a rythless rap, but you give it beauty and allow its acceptance. Nice.