Inside

remix of a School assignment a long time ago just randomly remembered it!!

Inside

Inside a world

Inside a country

Inside a state

Inside a city

Inside a house

Inside a room

Inside of me

You find a girl

You find a heart

You find lots of

Memorys

Laughs

Crys

Smiles

Frowns

and

 

Secrets

Author's Note

i hope u liked please rate i ushually make this stuff up as i go!! :-)

Reviews

[Sukriti Suki]

You are very very creative. I loved the flow of this piece and the deep emotion. Very well done here.

[Sujash I. Purna]

this is an unorthodox piece at its best! I'm really impressed with the single word lines: Memorys("Memories" is the right spelling but I say kudos for your bravery to create some avante-garde), Laughs, Crys(again :)), Smiles, Frowns and Secrets

Keep up the good work! It's a promising piece of poetry! :)