Howling Horrors

The unsettling wind made eerie sounds

It was breaking branches all around

Not long after was crunching of the ground

I covered my ears not wanting to hear

My eyes open wide in frights 

as new sounds howels through the night

A bang at the door 

sends a shock through my core

Whatever it is really wants in

If it succeeds I will be no more

It will leave my bones 

Scattered on the floor

Reviews

[CLR9]

I got it. It's Mike tyson

[Samuel Dickens]

I know I'm late for a Halloween reading, but hey, a howling good tale like this is good any time. Hope the door holds--if not, I'd put a lampshade on my head!

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Funny how our minds create an emotionally charged atmosphere when confronted with an unknown quantity - this is how your interesting write comes across to me. But we discovered it was only the pizza delivery boy - we feel quite foolish! Great share - :-)

[Wesley Dingler]

Wow Diane. This is a wonderfully creepy piece. It's fun y how beautiful it is to me to hear these noises. I guess it's a horror-craft thing. Eerie is my beautiful.

Thank you for sharing your own grim thoughts on the subject.



Wes

[Relic]

The thought of it is pretty scary. Frightening poems can be fun. :)

[Robert Trakofler]

Ha! I loved it great rhyme and flow nice nice nice! Huge fan of anything macabre I'm a cheerfully morbid bunny :)

[Novelwriter97]

Wow, really nice poem. I really enjoyed it! ^_^

[Diane]

Thank you.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Chilling little number.
A scary creation, Diane!

[Wild Rose]

You must live in a very different world to us > No banshees or wild bears here

Just gales which blow salt from the sea over the cars and windows > takes off roof tiles > blows over the bins