My life... (Poem)

My life is nothing but pain

Hands tied by a chain

Brain hit by a cane

Bad enough to be insane

My life is nothing but a mess

Always having to stress

Wearing an ugly dress 

But always having to undress

I just wish he wasn't so obsessed!

My life is nothing but sorrow

Always thinking there's a tomorrow

But there never will be one

If I won't get to flee once

By: MrWriter (Shaan)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Unhappy poetry shared my friend. I hope things are going better. Thank you for sharing your words and thoughts,
Coyote

[K.L. Ravns]

good use of rhyming. The first paragraph needs a little work though. The third line of the first para does not seem to work and flow like the rest of it. keep up the good work.

[heartspeaks]

Okay i can't fake review so i will tell frankly and please don't take it to heart. I am just telling what i felt and not judging the emotion you wrote with , okay. So, the first two para's made me laugh , seriously , especially"
Hands tied by a chain
Brain hit by a cane
Bad enough to be insane and I just wish he wasn't so obsessed!.." hahaha i really liked it. no offence again .

and the next para was real deep .
A good read.

[Stacy Purvis]

Sweetheart, I'm going to pray for you. Thank you for sharing from your heart.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you!! This is just from my imagination :D

[Embryonic]

Nice poem that I find oddly relatable (to some extent). Good rhymes!

[Farhan Shaikh]

It is a wonderful poem to read,
You should change your name from Mr.writer to Mr.Good Writer😉 very well penned

[Mr.Writer]

Just saying.... this isn't MY, MY life. It's just a poem I've made :)