Trust (Poem)

We trust family

But that trust can be broken

By being unwise 

Reviews

[B]

Very wise
and i really enjoy the brevity

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much!! :)

[Zenovia]

Once broken the bond cannot be fixed back, same manner the trust once lost the hope is also lost with it

[Mr.Writer]

So true! Thank you for reviewing!

[matrixmark]

Very, very true words. I can relate to this piece soooo well. The trust can be broken as you say and when it does it is difficult to mend. From my own personal point of view, the trust is gone forvever, from an outsider point of view you will always get people saying that it can. But if they dont know how deep the cuts have gone then they will never understand.

Not really a review i know, but i though i would share my thoughts. They are not wrong or are they right - they are just my opinion which i felt i had to express.

What i will say though, is that the piece had quite an impact of me and the words packed an almighty punch.
Mark.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Mark! I totally agree with you, for some it may be hard to get trusted upon again but for some, but will happen, but for others the trust is gone once it's broken

[Stacy Purvis]

Tiny, but powerful. Who or what do you consider family? Blood? Friends? The question lingers...

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Anastasia! :) Well... that question will remain lingered... ;)

[Stacy Purvis]

Ha! Devious little monkey! 😂😂😂

[Mr.Writer]

A monkey I am.. little... I'm not ;)

[Najam Us Saher]

Very true. You have said a lot in just three lines. Well done.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much!!

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺

[Coyote Poetry]

You said a mouthful in the three lines. My dear Grandfather told me often. "Truth is earned and if lost. Hard to find again." Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and thoughts.
Coyote

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much! :) I totally agree with your Grandfather, it's hard to find trust again after being broken. :

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.