Hate (Poem)

Just a thought...

What world are we in?

Shouldn't we love each other?

And try to find peace?

Reviews

[N.]

I understand your longing but unfortunately, there will never be true piece but it does not mean we should strive to achieve it. Your piece is cry that many in our world ask yourselves.

[Mr.Writer]

I know, but am still going to be hoping :)
Thank you N! :)

[MCS]

No making sense of this madness
Very well done

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you MCS!

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend. Hard to understand this world. Powerful and worthwhile words.
Coyote

[Mr.Writer]

It is hard indeed.
Thank you Coyote! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[pia]

Shaan sadly this is just a dream we all someday wanna achieve :( the world becomes more hostile everyday.
Its nice you poured out your feelings here
Its nice there are people still left in this world who care about this stuff

[Mr.Writer]

I know, but we can still be hopeful for it to come :)
Thank you Pia :)

[Abhishek Asthana]

very nicely penned,,, really liked it...

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Abhishek

[Kesha]

A wonderful haiku with deep meaning..!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much!

[Kesha]

You're welcome!

[Donicca Dona L]

I guess we should.

as a believer of peace and love, I feel so related to this.
with only three lines you created magic.
very well done.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much!

[Zoya]

If only this were true...These three lines speak volumes. You've penned down your thoughts beautifully. Well written!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Zoe! I wish it could be true... :(

[Zoya]

Yup, all of us do...You're welcome

[Dr. YumnaKay]

We should. But that ain't as easy as it sounds.. I think we can only find peace when we ourselves are at peace..
Nice thoughts, Shaan :)

[Mr.Writer]

That is very true, we need to be at peace first.
Thank you Yumna! :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Shaan. A pleasure always 😊

[Hope]

Peace is hard to find today with all the fights and chaos..
You create wonders with three lines.....
Great work

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much :)

[Mr.Writer]

I agree, peace is hard to fine, I just wish we could get together and be one

[Hope]

You are right...