King or Queen (Poem)

Follow me and I'll take you places;

places you've never seen

Hold my hand tight and don't let go

Cause' if you let go, there'll be a great scene

You'll fall in a world with people you don't know

And this time you won't be king or queen

Your chapter should have ended ages ago

And trust me, you won't be clean

Reviews

[pia]

This is amazing
Well since its so open ended ill analyse it in a way that lets me relate to it. Holding on to people who are the most special to u and treat your a king or a queen
Ppl who let u stand out and let you be special
And when you let go of em
U fall back into a crowd that doesnt appreciate you the way they do
Great job i loved it

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Pia! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thoughtful and rhymed very well. I felt like you forced the rhyme in the last line.

[Mr.Writer]

Lol thank you Najam!! :D I kinda did force it

[Najam Us Saher]

I felt that....you're welcome 😁

[Surya]

Truth in words filled with feelings...I enjoyed it Shaan...:)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much! :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

this was well written.....i loved it and the sentences were amazing...i loved it!!....happy writing shaan!!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Wajiha! :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

my pleasure mr. writer!...keep writing interesting stuff like this all the time!...will be waiting for your next piece!

[Farhan Shaikh]

This is really amazing mate, wonderful poem, well penned.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much