Hard to move on... (Poem/story)

just wanted to share some thoughts...

I wish you loved me

the way I did

I wish you looked at me

the way I did

But there wasn't much of a connection

As we weren't meant for each other

You went your way, and left me to move on

It, wasn't easy...

Shedding tears for 3 months, alone

Unable to tell anyone about you

It was horrible

and I didn't like one bit of it...

But had no other choice

Except to move on... 

Reviews

[Sam]

Aw I really like this! I could relate with this, I think we've all been there. Really good!

[Mr.Writer]

I agree, we've all been through this stage at one point, thank you Sam!! :)

[Hope]

Sometimes moving on cam lead us to a place we would never imagine in our wildest dreams.
It never hurts to try!!
You expressed the feeling well:)
Great poem Shaan;)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Neetha!
I agree, we can always try :)

[Zoya]

Each word of it is true...moving on is not an easy task...very relatable. Well written!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Zoe! I tried my best to make it relatable and am glad it is :)

[Zoya]

Yeah, it really is. You're welcome!

[CAPOLAVORO]

"It, wasn't easy...
Shedding tears for 3 months, alone
Unable to tell anyone about you"

The line is too realistic that I could really feel every bit of it. Good poem. :)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Capolavoro! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Sad and heart touching write...I liked it a lot...

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Najam!! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. ☺

[Sofia]

A sad yet excellent write. I loved it. I even loved the font style. Keep writing :)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Sofia!! :)

[Sofia]

Most welcome ☺

[Surya]

It's sad..but have to move on....maybe something is waiting for you...:)

[Mr.Writer]

Hopefully :)
Thank you Surya!