Dreams... (Poem)

As night gracefully approaches

so does something special

Purely made from my head

 imaginary, yet so real

It's vivid images embracing me 

taking me somewhere I want to be

All the desires I have, being fulfilled

due to what we call, dreams

As they take us away from reality

and clean our souls and minds

Make us feel wanted 

and considered

And fade away as we wake

to the glorifying sunset

Reviews

[Surya]

Haha..That's what it is actually...last lines said it all..I enjoyed it shaan...:)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Surya!

[mae23]

Loved all the intricate phrasing in this piece!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you!! :)

[Bear]

This has the kind of subtle detail description you find in stage plays, great job my friend Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Bear!! :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

the last two lines were so beautifully expressed....beautiful....keep going.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Wajiha! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

In sweet dreams. Love is perfect.
"As they take us away from reality
and clean our souls and minds"
I liked the above lines and I enjoyed the complete poem. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Coyote! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Najam Us Saher]

That's true dreams fulfills our desires and makes us feel better. A soothing poem. I loved it.

[Mr.Writer]

Yep, definitely dreams do fulfil our desires! Thank you Najam!! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.☺

[emipoemi]

I'm not particularly fond of free verse, but very few poets have actually hooked me onto their writing in spite of that, for their free verse is actually deserving to be called poetry; for proving they know what they're doing when they write poetry (in verse of free). You, my friend, have joined those ranks with this poem here. Absolutely fantastic!! A couple of notes, if I may:

1. "All the desires I have, being fulfilled" - free verse may not be constrained by a set rhythm, but it doesn't mean that it's also lacking a musicality. This is measured (just like rhythm) from the start and it's the fluidity of the poem from thought to thought, line to line. This particular line can lose a couple of syllables in order to help the musicality flow smoother...something along the lines of "My every desire, being fulfilled".

2. "sunset"....or "sunrise"?

Well done!!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much for the detailed review and feedback! I really appreciate it!
Haha yeah, it was supposed to be sunrise