Eternity in hell

An ending in which we fear

The Walls are fire
The bodies are burned
We have one thing in common
None of us have learned

People are screaming
People are dying
We can't  leave this place
Your fears aren't lying

Our choices brought us here 
Our lives are done
We had our chance 
Now he has won

Here we will remain
Here we will end our life
We will die burning
For eternity we will live in strife

Reviews

[Sabbath_Nikole]

Interesting, very interesting. you following the traditional christian belief of hell. Nice description.

[GunMetal]

"We have one thing in common
None of us have learned "
Very cool.

[Senseless whatever]

Good write. I like how you had a 'consistency' in the beginning of each stanza. Good message overall, well conveyed.

[Wolfe Greytome]

Very good write here with excellent imagery.

[Cody Wiggins]

WOW MAN THATS ALL I CAN SAY

[The Water Queen]

I love your imagery and your writing. Great poem

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

Beautiful, your rhyme and flow is much more consistant than it was on your other poems. I loved this. Sad and painful but beautiful!!!! good job

[Kia-chan!]

This is sad, once again....but good :)

[deeps]

This is one write that can really move the soul
This tells a life that is living in peace but one day
will prosper. I like this.