Change

A poem for all of those who pursue to change themselves to being better

Gone, are those weak thoughts.
Returned, has that fire within me.
Free, am I from those heavy rocks.
Pointless, has been my stupidity.

Up, is where I’ll be aiming.
Down, I will never creep.
Faith, will I be Keeping.

Change, is what I seek.

Reviews

[M.Babu]

I love how you've structured it in a sort of question answer prose.
Very creative too the aspects you've managed to cover and how they've led to what you seek.
It had a very good flow to it and i loved how the short length managed to convey a powerful message. You got IT man. Start sharing them with me:)

Perfect! All in a few rocking lines! Change is good, I can't be without it. Very good poem! loved it.

[Searching 4 Serenity]

Amen! All has been said.

[Katannaism]

Short-but it spoke amazing volumes! This is a brief piece of Literary Art full of hope and the whole sense of 'moving forward'. Well done!!

[Kelly M.]

Very nice! The lines were simple and meaningful. Beautiful piece of work here! :) 100/100!

[Desert Dreamer]

I enjoy the image of letting go of the heavy rocks, free to fly free, to change.

this is inspiring. so young and so much talent. keep up the good work :)

[LauraRenee]

Amazing! I love the second verse. It flows so nicely. Change can be positive and aiming forward never backwards, up, never down, is always good :)

Superb work .... inspirational and I love the ending .