Bother Me

Reviews

[Emily]

I love it!
Well done!
Keep it up!

[Robert]

I really enjoyed reading this and the presentation is different (which I like). Good word choice throughout this piece.

[fattycbreezy52]

Wow....Seems I have really inspired you with all that artistic presentation and stuff;D
I know you wouldn't give me any sort of credit,so I am giving it to myself,on your behalf;D
Jokes aside,I just loved this.And the second line just really took me in

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome piece my friend... I like the format with the picture... good work!

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and good words. I like the thoughts and the meaning in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

A creative write in format and presentation and the approach "bother me" which in most cases is the complete reverse of many who say "don't bother me, leave me alone!" I liked this !:)

[B]

Unfortunately
Someone dear to our heart
can make us so furious sometimes
but even that
we love
it sucks

[Perkele.7885]

Very few people enjoy being alone for long periods of time. I like to be 'bothered' myself from time to time. I enjoyed this poem. (the word after beggar is misspelled) A good job, all in all, Mr. poet!

[Gabriel's Last Breath (band)]

thank you thank you very much! unfortunately "took" is spelled correctly, but whoever created the "k" for that font needs a good firm balltap