Words Escape Me

Can't cling on to them

Words continuously escape me

I feel trapped like a detainee

I know what I want to say

But my mind is in complete disarray

How can I convey my thoughts

If my brain is tied up in so many knots

How am I this disconnected

The only feeling I know is what it's like to be rejected

Each sentence I write feels pointless

I can't keep straight all these random voices

The only love I know is pain

Erasing my being like Acid Rain

I can't seem to escape this place

I guess all I can do is embrace this null space

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sibling]

I find the way your poem very relatable and relatively simple to read and understand. I also know what you mean when you say you feel like you dunno how to express yourself,because everything you write seems pointless,but then again that IS the point. Ironic hey?? ;)

[SW..if..TY]

absolutely!!! hahaha very ironic!! haha

[char]

Writers block? No such thing, 'tis but an illusion :) It'd be funny if I woke up tomorrow and couldn't write a thing after posting that. But that's what music is for! Artists inspire artists. Your style is unique. I'll say that now so I do not have to keep saying it :D

[SW..if..TY]

hahaha ya I guess you're right about the writers block! but thank you!

[Jem Sagcal]

For someone who's having trouble getting thoughts out, this poem looks to be something that has been well thought out. The rhyming scheme was perfect, and the piece is absolutely relate-able that it was so interesting to read.

[SW..if..TY]

I dunno I feel like I force my thoughts out, and it seems sloppy, but if it's actually quite decent, thenI'll keep doing what im doing!

[Pretty_as_a_Poet]

awesome dude! love the rhymes.

[SW..if..TY]

Thank you man!!

[Shannen Forrester]

... this is what you call writers block? I wish I could write something half as good as this when I have writers block :)

[SW..if..TY]

well ya, I felt like I had to force it out and that it wasn't really that good!

[Shannen Forrester]

Lies!!! I liked it :) but that's me, sometimes you don't have to like your own work for it to be good :)

[SW..if..TY]

Well thank you! but ya you're very right you don't have to like your own work for it to be good!