sunny days & dark days

sunny days 

so bright and beautiful

dark days

horrible and sad

sunny days 

so happy

and joyful

the sun shares it's happiness

with us 

it shares it's beauty

the dark day shares darkness

and sadness

it want's to take over

our lives

it's not a joyful thing 

in our lives

Reviews

[sarik]

Lesson to learn...

ty for the beautiful poem Fatima...

[Valentine]

Life is full of light and dark things. Just be thankful when you can distinguish between the two. Valentine

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

juxtapositioning is a great way to make these two elements stand out. great job staying with it! i would love to work with you anytime you need a hand. keep it coming !

[Fatema]

juxtapositioning, what does that mean

[FaeryQueen]

this poem is sooo great! love you cutiey xoxo

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Darkness also enables us to appreciate the light in a better way.
Nice write Fatema!

[Fatema]

thank youJyoti

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome.