a glimpse of your heart

 I saw you let your guard down once

 

in     b li s s f u l s m o o t h r h t h y m s o f d r u n k e n

content 

                                                

A glimpse of your heart

                    s       h       a       d       o       w       e       d

by  my  own,                        

full and heavy             

                              l       i       g       h        t                

 

blinded                                                                 

in the music of your soul             I

 

let my guard down once

 

in       b li s s f u l s m o o t h r h t h y m s o f d r u n k e n

content

                                

 

                                   

Reviews

[Arthur Henn]

Great poem and the way your format using your words is amazing to me.

Art

[Barry S. Maltese]

Oh, I know the reality of this poem. Too many people know the reality of this poem. You describe something that goes on so many evenings in so many bars and lounges that it is commonplace. Nice way of putting it all in words.