Unrealised

I am a tired moth
fluttering against the bright light
of a future no one else can see

It has started to flicker
and my headache's growing worse.

Reviews

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Again thank you for this entry in my little contest.
I'm sure you'll understand that I cannot comment now as this would be unfair to other entries.
I shall return after the contest ends.
Very best regards.
Clive.
P.S. I like this one but don't tell anyone.

[Iika]

Ha, thank you. And thank you so much for organising this contest!

[Iika]

Ha, thank you. And thank you so much for organising this contest!

[Relic]

Excellent use of metaphor in this. I love the style of this and the brevity of it. Going into my favorites.

[Iika]

This is starting to sound insincere because I keep repeating myself, but really, thank you. Means a lot to me.

[Relic]

It doesn't, your welcome. You're very good.

[A. Amos]

Deep and interesting piece of art, well done...

[Iika]

Thank you, I really appreciate your comment.

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my friend