Rage

Not one of the best flowing. Still kind of a work in progress.

The rage I feel inside,
Too hard to hide,
It bears me down,
Throws me to the ground,
My strength wears out,
Put my head back and shout,
Get away from me,
This darkness you should not see,
I have become what I hate,
But it is not too late,
Darkness flees from the light,
If I can make it through the night.

Author's Note

These being older poems, they don't have the advice that you've given me applied to them. Just wanted to add the original poems I had.

Reviews

[Legion]

Okay. It is an older one. Not bad though. Especially love the last two lines.