surrender

surrender

A Poem by Nan
"

the current state of mind elongated into infinity

"

I am the sigh beyond all causes

 

we are destined to look back

in time and wonder why

and what we fought for.

 

the tone of my being right now

is the need to purge my own soul

for the sake of sanity

humanity's peace sustains in my one note.

 

I rest in the sigh beyond all causes.

 

and that is where my heart remains

with the One from whom she came

newborn, over, overture it sings

 

I love in the sigh beyond all causes.

© 2008 Nan


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I like this.

THe words, the way its set up, its wonderful

"I love in the sigh beyond all causes."

That line is beautiful. While i am an outsider, I dont know that i can understand this piece, as i am not you:P But i did enjoy it. It has a feel to it, dreamy almost, but not:S

Its hard to describe:P

Great write:)


Posted 17 Years Ago



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Nan
Nan

Kansas City, MO



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