Cold winter night

how amazing can nature share with us our feelings!!!in this piece i find company in nature:)

beside the the window there i sate,watching every rain drop hit my window,it felt like every hit was targeting my wounded heart,i shiverd,looked at the wet roads..i could see the trees were moving,it felt like the leaves were shivering in fear that they moved those trees...i thought to myself is it rainning outside only?or is it rainning within?why every thing moves in pain in my eyes? felt a tear rolling down my cheek,they say you can cry in rain as no one will see your tears,it's so cold within my soul just like the weather outside..i knew i was having a cold winter night deep my heart &the nature were sympathizing me!!!!

Author's Note

please any grammer mistakes be free to point it out,i want to improve:)

Reviews

[Tom Chan]

very sad :) i love it!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautiful sad write of pain and anguish!

[An owl on the moon]

You move us from the rain to that which lies deep within... the storms that rage... Beautiful and bittersweet song to be sure...