the cell phone

A Poem by Nani Mino

the real love

the cell phone is still calm in my poor hand,

wails like a sad orphan in the lap of pain.

Ah! I scream the other part in which land?

Heavy minutes for my heart to sustain,

Before I see her number in the screen,

Before I switch off the hope of meeting.

I will give her a chance to be the queen

In a world she buried her sick meaning.

Now all the numbers are the same to me

0h! let not our minds on the phone to be,

Life is a fleeting glimpse, so we can see.

The light of truth when death sets our souls free.

Love is for ever only to the One,

Keep close to him , warm yourself by his sun.

© 2015 Nani Mino

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Michelle Gent

So intense. I could feel the angst. Beautifully done.

Posted 10 Years Ago

jesserose99

well Nani, I really enjoyed this, especially the ending. The ending seemed incredibly profound to me. The third line from the bottom really blows me away. Nice work all around though. I like the way it ended up making me feel.

Posted 10 Years Ago

David Scott

Life is busy and distracting. Yet the Sun seems to make Its presence known eve if we do not look up form our occupations.
Enjoyable read.

Posted 10 Years Ago

fierceauthor

Warm myslef by sun was deep,but I'm blessed to even encounter your talent!
Cell Phone is HOTTTTTTTT!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago

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10 Years Ago

do you know who is the One?

10 Years Ago

The one is GOD.

10 Years Ago

thanks you are very clever and talented

KingDavid

All, in all. It is good. It tells us about a relationship that seems to be going downhill. Well fhat was my opinion anyway. Except for a few flaws in your grammar, the poem worked out pretty well. Keep it up