another dream

we have to live whetever.....

He has left the real dream across the sea.

A boat of death to the world , it `s not yours,

Wherever you go fate can`t set you free.

those whom you love will never reach your shores

wood and water, your name will melt away.

Souvenirs trace you wherever you go .

Think over or all mountains will decay.

There`s seduction but you should say ``no``

Happiness is inside and not outside.

Lo! dear fame is a deep mask for failure.

Different soil means the face has to hide

Wool is black and white , you are a safe creature.

We are a part of time , let `s taste the life.

We `re a part of pain , we should be alive.

 

Reviews

[David Scott]

It is foretold the young will dream dreams and prophesy. I get a sense of this here.
Should we be alive? Maybe because we are alive we should act like it, or act intentionally on life's potential.
I sense gratitude here. I sense a higher calling.
Consider a format more flowing and opened. Try centering the write or breaking the lines where you would pause while speaking the poem. I learning this skill from other writers here as well.
Good work. Great philosophy.

[Nani Mino]

thank you for you precious comment. realy i need your help

[jesserose99]

These are beautiful words, 'happiness is inside and not outside', you speak a deep truth with those words. lovely

[felioness]

You created nice images as I read this piece!

[Nani Mino]

thank you for stopping by and your support