Hearts in the Moment

Retourne French Form written in quatrains

 

Hearts in the Moment

 

 

Hearts in the moment intertwined

Blended forever in the mind

Whispered moments of love divine

We’ll walk on the wild side this night

 

Blended forever in the mind

Hearts open to a new surprise

Love graffiti written within

As flashes of color explode

 

Whispered moments of love divine

Ears hear the complementing tone

As hearts sing of the whispered love

Awake oh my heart in ecstasy

 

We’ll walk on the wild side this night

Delighting within love’s sweetness

In firework display we rapture

Attaining completeness of soul

 

Reviews

[deleted]

Very beautiful sensual poem. It is so serene and comely the connection between the two. I especially liked the second stanza:

Blended forever in the mindHearts open to a new surpriseLove graffiti written withinAs flashes of color explode.

That was absolutely beautiful. Love graffiti written with a permanent marker upon our hearts. Your words flow so eloquently like water off of a beautiful deltoid leaf. Excellent read! Keep exercising your gift. Your style of writing is very unique.

[deeps]

This is a wonderful and most beuatiful write here
Like this write alot, it is well expressed.

[R.D.Scott]

Its not often i find a love poem of a positive nature on her, its a refreshing change and I really enjoyed this piece.