Broken

A freestyle verse of dark emotions

The deep emptiness surrounds me The hollowness of desolation inherits my soul The vast void that was my heart  Is now a vacant hole The scorned, and detested life I lived Is again unwelcomed, and undesirable To he who unliked,and contradicted,she fell out of favor Her misapplied love, squandered, dissipated, and forsaken His corrupted misuse, had defiled, and tainted the love they shared The plague of despair brought about the melancholy downheartedness, loss of confidence, and hopelessness She now feels forsaken,abandoned, and alone The darkness consumes her, and she is withdrawn, and secluded

© Copyright 2014 crimsonette

Reviews

[Sapphire Naylor]

Well written. I really enjoyed reading. Good job.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Dark and poignant, with deep emotion. Just the way that I like them! Nice work.