Guilt

thanks for Jess of editing it.

Guilt

Oh! Do not ask about my guilt

Leave me alone. Go! Go away

I can’t tell you

Hearing it will be sorrowful

Like a big mourn

OK! OK! You like to know?

So listen to me!

Its always on my hands

I bring pains to my heart

And pain to my soul

Author's Note

your guidance has helped me a lot thanks for all my helpers.

Reviews

[Littlelady]

Briliant poem
I cant see anything wrong with it

[V]

Guilt-a feeling, a state of mind, everyone of us knows (too well sometimes). I like the line "it's always on my hands". Nicely done.

[Arman]

thanks you!

[andrew mitchell]

I can't tell you
Hearing will be sorrowful,
a big mourn.
Ok! Ok! You like to know.
Listen to me!
It's always on my hands
I bring pains from my heart,
pain from my soul.

[wordman]

a energetic write,it sounded believable,guilt is a hard dose of medicine

[Arman]

thanks, dear!

[wordman]

my pleasure

[andrew mitchell]

A power write especially from a war torn country. one suggestion I may be wrong but I prefer " I can't tell you" than I can't tell to you". I would remove "like" from the line a big mourn. and I would have the line " you like to know it" changed to " You like to know" It isn't a great choice however I have used "It" also lol

[Arman]

thanks for nice instruction.

[andrew mitchell]

you are welcome, may help but i'm no teacher lol

[Arman]

i really appreciate it.

[KittyKatgirl]

This has a lot of emotion. Guilt of what you have done and fear of telling someone is strong when combined. This is a great powerful poem and thank you for asking me to read it.

[Arman]

and thanking for reviewing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful use of the language. Regret and guilt. A heavy burden to know and hold. The words were heavy with regret and I liked how you led to the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Arman]

thank you for it. please read my other poems and get instruction to me.

[Coyote Poetry]

I will read more tonight. You are a talented writer. Good to have found your work.

[Arman]

hahah. i am lucky for getting your love of reading. thanks

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Alexandra Hounschell]

Huh, it's like guilt is explaining itself in a way. It's too guilty to talk about itself

[Mistaken Angel]

I like it, I can feel the emotion in the words. Well done!
~Tealah.

[Arman]

thanks for review.

[Mistaken Angel]

You're welcome.

[Mell]

Just reading it you can see the pain. I liked it.

[Arman]

thanks so much.