No Hope

A Story by Natalie

A 50 word story.

......

This always happened in books.

The girl was bound by larger adversaries. Her thoughts whirled, paralyzing fear churned in her stomach.

But she always seemed to have hope. In my world? There was none.

The knife’s teeth dug into my neck, I screamed, and everything went black.

Blissfully,

blissfully

black.

...

© 2011 Natalie

Author's Note

Sorry, lame. No excuses, I know.

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Salvatore Buttaci

Congratulations for winning the 50 worder contest!

Posted 16 Years Ago

Salvatore Buttaci

Congratulations on winning the 50-word contest!

Posted 16 Years Ago

Wicahpi

Okay, do me a favor, please?

Stop degrading your writing!

I have enjoyed everything I've read so far!!

Have some CONFIDENCE!! k?

Peace n Light,
Wicahpi

ps. Congrats on your award

Posted 16 Years Ago

Edalene Connell

I don't know what the fuss is all about. I like it. Of course that is just my opinion.

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on August 27, 2009
Last Updated on February 27, 2011

Author

Natalie

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Well, I've always loved to write. My grandfather was a writer, and my father absolutely loves it, but didn't go into writing as a profession because as he loves to say, "No ones gonna pay you to writ.. more..