Wildfire

Another 50 word story, or... poem?

-Wildfire-

 

Lighting-bugs lit up the grass, like the world was on fire. 

You touched my hand, and it was.  My heart smoldering as you stroked my hair, soul blazing as your fingers grasped mine. 

But it was a pleasing fire.  The kind that makes you feel free... 

Makes you feel wild.  

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Author's Note

Read description... any suggestions? :O

Reviews

[Randa]

A writer is their own worst enemy. I know from experience. I used to trash everything I wrote until I took writing courses. You just need to keep writing and believe in your own ability. You say it's a 50 word story, I think it's more like a poem than a story, that's my own personal opinion. But putting that aside, what's lacking is details or imagery.

[Wicahpi]

My only suggestion.....

BELIEVE IN YOUR SELF!!!

and Keep Writing!

Delightful Write & Congrats on Your Award!