Nirvana

I wrote this quite a while ago, it's something different from my usual gloomy writes but please do enjoy it :-)

I want to feel you.
I want to feel you between my fingers.
I want to feel you.

Crashing against the figures.
Rushing through my hair.
It is a roaring breeze trying to break free.

Passing all the beautiful things in life too.
Ecstasy which still lingers.
Viewing the blurred images of white and blue.

I sit staring, it's midwinter and it triggers.
These memories made are for you, are you aware?
They are full of bliss, don't you agree?

Author's Note

please do share your thoughts !

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"Passing all the beautiful things in life too.
Ecstasy which still lingers.
Viewing the blurred images of white and blue."

I liked this stanza the best. Ecstasy, memories, oblivion is what we most crave in life. And I agree with your last lines. It is a bliss for sure.
Very neat. I liked reading this :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words and thoughts. Some emotions make us believe. We have found Nirvana. Thank you Nately for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Asya Kardzhaliyska]

I like the longing and nostalgia that drives this piece forward, you can really feel everything that's happening to the character. Thanks for sharing :)

[jaybeth]

This is picturesque, your poem creates that atmosphere that is almost touchable.

[wordman]

lingering memories of a lost love or a night of magic