Inception

I wrote this approximately 10 mins ago. I was trying to make a more upbeat story with this poem, but the success was less than five percent haha. Well hope you enjoy! :-)

A euphoric facade that veils only the sullen.
Hearing an eerie melody the fiend is humming.

It is the humming that masks her screaming.
Perceiving an angel passing by, she's day dreaming.

While night has fallen, her dreary slumber allure.
Following the serenity whose idea was solely to immure.

Author's Note

Drop your thoughts in the comment box below please :-)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Some wild dreams in the poetry. Sometime we find scary place when we seek sleep. Thank you Natehy for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Asya Kardzhaliyska]

This is a really powerful piece and I enjoyed reading it :)

[Shannon]

People hide who they are and what they feel every day. Sad situation eloquently penned.

[zaisham9393]

A euphoric facade that veils only the sullen.
I loved reading it !
Thank you for sharing :)!

[BBP]

Hey.. I cant really do upbeat either. lol I appreciate the darkness in this one. Sometimes darkness is the only friend or comfort.

[wordman]

sounds like she is in deep thought,day dreaming
humming her song while angels fly by