hallucinate

well, not really sure about this...

Lying still, 

the sounds of your breathing

First you inhale. 

Then you exhale. 

I wonder, 

Have you ever dreamt of blissfulness? 

Your fingers twitch around mine. 

Then your mouth curves into a smile. 

You know, 

Your love fills me up with warmth. 

You fill me in ways,

I didn't know 

I was empty. 

If only you weren't a dream. 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[mournful bear]

"You fill me in ways,
I didn't know
I was empty." Nicely phased we are all empty yet unknowing of how to fill our empty space! It out there to fill us. Great penning!! Sometimes all you hear is your breath.

[Harley Quinn]

I loved it! It made me smile. Beautiful.

[Natehy]

Thank you very much, Snow Angel!

[wordman]

dream lover ,or one sided lover,great write

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Spectre lover – invading your dreams with promises of fulfilment; very nicely penned … :-)

[Natehy]

As if the love was a lie or is I shade say... Thank you Phill Oz O'fee (-:

[Coyote Poetry]

Very difficult when love is one-sided. I liked the description. You made the reader feel the thoughts and the need. Thank you Nately for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote