Hey Guitar Guy

A couple of lines I wrote for fun. Dedicated to my most recent crush - didn't think I still had it in me! ; -)

I am going to tell you a secret

Don't care if you lose or keep it,

I've got a huge crush on you

I adore everything you say and do,

And when you begin to play

It totally blows me away,

When you smile you just bring

Sexy back to the room you are in,

There is so much to explore

Your eyes have me begging for more,

Hey, what's a girl to do?

Got too many naughty fantasies of you!

Lights, clothes; on, off

God, don't ever tell me to stop...

It all starts with a kiss

You're such a smouldering hot daydream of bliss.

Reviews

[Gabrielle E. M. T.]

Great poem. Wow, to tell a guitarist that you have a crush on them. I love it. I've done that before haha. Ended out great. Excellent rythme and ryhme in this piece. Brilliant flow of words. Wonderfully written. Great Job! ^_^

[Kelly Scheppers]

I have a family member who can play. It's like a "high" to her ~ she simply loves it. You've gotta go with your passion in life, and make it count!

Good work, Natasha, and btw, I love the color variation!

[Bruce Bray]

well.. since i play guitar in a band.. I LUV IT.. LOL
seriously, it is a good piece..
almost lyrical.