Deception

I would never tell your secret,

When asked, I will always lie.

Betraying your trust is something I could never do,

I will keep it hidden, 'till the day I die.

My lips will always remain sealed,

Not a word of what was told, 

For keeping your secret is what binds us,

Now, and when we're old.

I always stay true to my word,

Even if that requires some sort of deception.

I'll spin it however necessary,

And make sure it is completely hidden.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Deception is hard work. Lies on lies lead us to more lies. Deception can be double work. Nice use of words and thoughts. I enjoyed them. Thank you Hanabi for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[augustus]

I like your work a great deal. Keep it up!!

[the.morbid.soul]

The poem shows the truthfulness of the poet. How he stands by the promise to keep the secrets of his loved one. Amazing work!

[CuddlyBunny]

I enjoyed this very much the loyalty and commitment it depicts in my mind is that if but s fairy tale I long for so dearly. Very well written.

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Respect, _Hanabi_

I enjoyed reading your poem, especially the feeling of loyalty and importance of keeping someone`s secret. The feeling behind that loyalty and importance is genuine and caring.

Enjoy your life!

[JackValor86]

i like it. short and singular in meaning.
may I recommend rhyming with the word "intention" for the last line somehow, i think it would give your poem a better POP at the end.

[JackValor86]

"I do this with my best intentions" for example