the sun

i just sat there staring into the darkness wondering what it can be....wondering what this quietness could be about...then...suddenly it happened the most amazing thing i could ever dream to see....as i looked out the window i saw the sky turn from black to yellow, then suddenly turn orange.....as i continued to watch i saw it get really light......then as i watched more closely i saw it rise over the mountains in it`s bright orange-red beauty....and within seconds it was high above the earth sharing it`s light with the world.

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Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

really delightful passage

thx for sharing

[Lina Grey]

Great use of imagery and personification to describe such a commonly forgotten beauty. A very expressive and inspiring write. Thank you.

[zero binty]

The truest beauty is in the little things that people seem to forget to notice. Nice write.