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Her eyes were light green like the fresh grass on a summers day, her lips were soft and red as a rose,her ears were pointy exactly like one of and elf,her nose was straight as a pencil,her teeth were small and exceptionally white, her cheeks would turn red every time she blushed, her hair was black as night and curly as a spaghetti, her neck was slender as a snake`s, her chest was flat and very soft, her shoulders were broad, her hands were very soft and small just as her fingers which were very short,her breasts were small  and tender as a baby`s buttocks,her stomach was flat and soft,her thighs were thick, her  legs were long and smooth,her ankles were thin,her toes were small and soft as her fingers were.....  

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Reviews

[zero binty]

The flow feels like it is going to lead somewhere...just trying to figure out where. Maybe that is the gist of this piece? Such as is a lot of Japanese movies lead the watcher to develop their own conclusions, your piece may turn your description into many a personality. Touche.

[Tegon Maus]

I like this one. I read your sparky story and think there might be "Daddy" issues... perhaps the lack of reliablity or compassion on his part in the under story. Here, it feels as if you're trying to see yourself in two ways... the first a more TV or movie image or desired self image... The second the real you... or at least the you that you think is you. I find it interesting you said "her chest was flat and very soft" and then "her breast were small and tender" almost like you're speaking about two different people... you used the word soft 5 times... its a strong emotional word here. Almost a memory... I find it very interesting

[_Hanabi_]

thnx alot

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Great job with the smilies:)