Everything`s not OK!!!

If everything was okay I won`t be writing this note.If everything was okay I won`t be in y room crying.If everything was okay I won`t be sobbing every day.If everything was okay I won`t be missed at my own birthday parties.If everything was okay i won`t be trying so hard to hide the truth.If everything was okay I won`t be so mad at you.If everything was OK....well it`s not.

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Reviews

[♋ Iris ♋]

Awesome poem. I know what some of this is like, so I can somewhat relate. Thanks for putting this up for everyone to know that they are not alone and that others feel this way.

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and direct words in the emotional poem. Some sadness need for us to mourn and seek solitude. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[werejustcountrygirls]

I agree with everyone saying we hide feelings, I think we all need that special someone in our life who will poke and prod until we share our feelings, and then comfort us while we mope in them.

[Danielle]

relatable , for sure. nowadays we're so good at hiding our feelings. well written piece .

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

We do hide feelings so well....
sometimes need to just express them...
poetry sure helps that....

[zero binty]

It is rare that anything truly is. Cliche, but time is the only thing that can do anything about pain. Choose the people you trust with your truths wisely. Strong poem. Crush of emotion.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Oh, this is a great piece. It comes out and tells the truth about NOT being okay. Most people just hold in their feelings.Great, write