When We Slept

This is...surreal. Hence, I love it. Inspired by Last of the Wilds by Nightwish and Transylvania by Iced Earth.

Sweet melodies, tumbling through breezes
Of old and new times. Kissing as time freezes,
Showering the world with wealth,
No need for secrecy, no need for stealth.

Savage darkness tamed by those
who know nothing of magic and only of summers snows.
Filling these worlds with light unknown
to all. And spilling seeds unsown

Into a world anew. Falling, falling
Into green grasses. Singing, singing
Of moments to come. Skies blue forever more,
Flowers washing into that dream ashore.

Rushing water. Billowing Breezes.
Mountains erupting; God sneezes.
One more time, no time left.
Gone are those days when we slept.

Author's Note

Try reading this as you listen to the aforementioned inspiration. Try it! I know you'll love it. ;]

Reviews

[Tayler]

Stunning! I actually had to pay attention while reading this, which is a truely marvelous thing. Some poems are so poorly written that you don't need to pay attention and you can understand it.
Kudos for depth, for feeling, and for hidden meanings!

[An owl on the moon]

This is so beautifully moving, bringing about a depth of thought and feeling with each poignant phrase. Amazing write!