Uhm, the words might be off from what I wanted it to mean. If you see anything that doesn't make sense, do tell! I'd love knowing what the right words are.
"I am born, I drink, I call, I grow, I thrive, I play, I laugh, I dance, I kiss, I break, I cry, I learn, I see, I love, I marry, I give life, I give, I care, I am old, I die."
That's what it's supposed to be.
By god, did that sound like an Apple ad, or what?
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Haha, it's funny that you wrote this in Latin. I'm required to take Latin at my school, and would never dream of writing a poem in it. But this is really cool; maybe someday you'll be writin' epics like Virgil (Just Kidding)
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Simple but great, even in english would've been a good writing I guess, but the touch of an almost death language gives it a touch of superiority which was very effective here. Great writing.
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