Me

this peom is about me

Life, slow traffic stuck behind a crashed car.

Love, finding a hole in the earth from a falling star

Soul, joyful sadness tares it apart

Time, how do we finish f we never start?

Mind, stable yet to be broken down

Words, not spoken just wrote down

Feelings, shut out to everyone

Heart, broken in need of love

Pain, hidden behind smiles seen not heard

Self, to complex for words

Author's Note

no one truley knows me

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

I think to some extent we all feel like no one completely knows us. We all wear a variety of masks on a daily basis.. the daughter, the wife, the co-worker, but deep down, we share our true selves with very few people. This is a great write about a very deep subject and you did an excellent job showing that.

[OtherWorldWoman]

This is a unique style you have used and it really speaks to me. I like it a lot. Everyone has many complexities and layers to them that cannot be explained fully to anyone...Things that only an individual can understand about themselves. And your poem portrays that. Another poem very well done.

[rwar ish me]

Another good, poem, good expressions, short but with alot of feeling put into it