Rattled

A Haiku.

The Pretty Baby 

I saw in a magazine.

Lay in a casket. 

Author's Note

This is my attempt at Haiku. Once again serious tone. Let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Avinash]

A beautiful life that could have been. I like the words that you have chosen as it took just 3 lines to cover the journey from the cradle to the grave.

[flowetry07]

Thank you so much for your review, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Alexx Wake]

5.7.5
I always adored this format. Unfortunately this poem is way over my head.

[Saul Greenblatt]

Poetry is not my strong suit. I'm sure your poetry is fine, but I can't offer any words one way or the other. Sorry.

[flowetry07]

Thank you for your review.