One day, we shall once again meet

It's pretty much garbage, written in a minute and a half... but it's what's been on my mind, I suppose.

One day,
You and I, we shall meet again.
After time's rapids and life's pains
have creased your face and bent your spine,
and your eyes are grey with sleep,
we shall again find eachother, lost in the mists.
No longer shall a mold of flesh imprison your soul,
your mind, your heart,
but you shall be free, as you always desired,
and as you must be.
And I promise,
when sleep has overcome you, a comfort like a fire
burning at the embers,
I will be waiting.
And I promise,
that until that very moment,

 

my eyes will never fully close.
 

Reviews

[StrawberryDream]

:O How dare you insult such a beautiful poem! This is my favorite one that you've done.

[Chaotica]

oh my god, thats beautiful

[Grey]

garbage?!?
dude, thats the best minute-and-a-half poem i've ever read.
"your eyes are grey with sleep" - i really like that line.
so sure, there might be grammar mistakes or something... but your ultimate meaning is deep & profound.