NUMB

A Poem by neanie

INSPIRED BY MY MARRIAGE...

NUMB IS HOW YOU MAKE ME FEEL,

WHEN YOU TREAT ME AS YOU DO.

ANGRY AT THIS LIFE I AM LIVING,

WHEN I RECEIVE NO LOVE FROM YOU.

POINTLESS IS HOW MY EFFORTS SEEM,

WITH ALL YOUR DISAPPOINTMENTS IN ME.

NO MATTER HOW HARD I TRY,

THE WRONGS I DO ARE ALL YOU SEE.

j.f.monkman, 15-2-2008.

© 2008 neanie

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James K. Blaylock

This is so sad, love should bring people closer... instead of making a wedge.

jkb

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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neanie

glasshouse mountains hinterland, Australia

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i live near the glasshouse mountains in sunny queensland. i love to write POETRY about almost anything that pops into my head! i am looking foward to beginning university next year to study nursing a.. more..