deep movement

We walk to see the stars,

never knowing if we'll ever walk this road again

who can tell which road it is,

in our hearts

or under our feet?

my heart beating as heavily as an earthquake

makes me feel at ease,

all because feeling life ecstatically

is how I want to be

like hot tea for a sore throat

it soothes me

knowing you are there

Reviews

[Lydia]

Wow, this is really good. Your flow is amazing and your word choice is great. Good job.

[Honeypot]

You have alot of talent girl! I really liked this one. I think your poetry has a deeper level than just the surface topic. Its really wonderful

[Wunderlich]

Very well written. Excellent job.

[jessie]

This is an awesome piece! It is very sweet.

[Emily B]

this is wonderful . . . so glad you came to visit my work today. Otherwise, I might never have found it.