I Dream

I dream

Sand through fingers passing time

In the oily black of night

Screaming radiant coalescence

Illuminated

Brilliant oddities ingested by great minds

Scholars of art and war

Death from watery hallucination blue

I dream

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Neal S.
"I Dream" Tells of the needed time of rest and its crazy mind bending reality while we are sleeping. I like the the picture painted of minutes gradually passing in the night; "Sand through fingers..oily black of night."
The mystery of our inner life in sleep and dreams; "Screaming radiant coalescence, Illuminated."
We all dream; "Brilliant oddities ingested by great minds, scholars of art and war."
And just the fascination of the creative nature of humanity even in our dreams; Death from watery hallucination blue. I dream."
Quite a wonderful look at who we are in rest-sleep-dreams-visions. Blessings, Kathy

[None]

...I like!! I have somehow lost the ability of simplicity

[Neal S]

Maybe you've just evolved to a different stage of your writing. Honestly iv'e never written anything as long and complex as what you do. Thanks for the review.

[None]

thanks ...a natural effect of madness I suppose

[Neal S]

"Follow your inner moonlight; don't hide the madness." Ginsberg :)